I am surrounded by friends. I am alone.
I am confident. I am insecure.
I am complete. I am broken.
I am healthy. I am sick.
I am one. I am two.
I am not the same as you.
I am two. But I am one.
I am sick. But I am strong.
I am broken. But I am rebuilding.
I am insecure. But I am moving forward.
I am alone. But I have found comfort in knowing,
We are all the same.
Beautiful. I am touched
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So glad to hear these words impacted you. Feel free to check out some other pieces! And thank you for the follow, I returned the favor!
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Maybe I’m missing it, but did you put a trigger warning on this? Sorry to say anything negative but suicide related post are really hard for me.
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I only (attempted) to allude to the feeling of depression. I didn’t mean to infer the thought of suicide. I tried to make this more optimistic actually, but I apologize if anything made you uncomfortable. I’ll be more careful about how I label my work from now on!
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I think you and I read different posts. The one I read began with someone trying to decide if they were going to jump off the golden gate bridge.
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That was a different piece than the one you commented on. This thread is for a poem I wrote which is why I was confused. And I did not put a trigger warning, you are right. Even though I have the character saved it is important to remember what people have gone though. So I apologize again.
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Ahh. I guess we were reading different posts, literally! Thanks. Sorry to cause a fuss. 🙂
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Good lines, did you write them?
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I did!
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At first the poem is pessimistic and then when I reached the ending it was optimistic 😀
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